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#1

I hope you guys like it! Took me a while!

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#2

The animation is a bit choppy. And the main character should change position after the strike. Other than these things its good.

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#3

yeah im a vfx artist not an animator! >:D

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#4

Looks pretty okay to me, like the effects of the sword, so well done on that!

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#5

it might look choppy because of the FPS. Not too sure though.

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#6

I suggest adding audio to spice it up, regardless well done!

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#7
  • add audio
  • add more humanish stuff like after he does the pose thing make him start panting or smthn and have his arm shake up and damn a bit
  • add more like points to the animation make it smotth also did you choose an easing style? (guessing ur moon anim)
  • VFX definatly seems your thing lol no problem with that!
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#8

Yeah i mean im no audio guy, plus im not gonna hire one for a damn vfx showcase XD

I also didn’t go overboard on the animations simply for the fact that the main focus is still the vfx- it’s the thing I’m showing off, not my mediocre animation skills xD

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#9

I think it looks great. Well done! What was the most challenging part?

#10

This animation looks very good! Nice job on this!

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#11

That last part where the character doesn’t move for a few seconds would fit if the screen fades to black or something, otherwise add backswing to the character (AKA animation after the character has done the attack).

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#12

Making all the frames for the slash texture.

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#13

Yeah it’s a recreation from a turn based combat game.

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#14

in my opinion it looks weird because the slash VFX at the end is not animated.

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#15

What do you mean by animated? The disapation animation for the slash vfx consists of 46 frames.

#16

i mean that the slash at the end isn’t moving in any way, it just fades out. it looks kind of weird imo

#17

Well yeah, considering its literally roblox - the platform that has worse VFX support than unity back in 2003 then its not quite a surprise i don’t have access to shaders that could give me good ways to erode a vfx.

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#18

Hey is there any way i could contact you for hire my dc is adcrs