Made a GFX, what do you guys think? Or what kind of improvement should I focus on?

[XxAviaRWXxX (DeltaVar)]

I am sorry if the Watermark blocked a little bit of the main focus, but I had to do it cause of people stealing it

[Endless_VoidInTime (shehatesmaw)]

Try improve the lighting, some parts of lighting i dont understand since the background is dark it would make sense to make the lighting a bit dark aswell. Effects can be improved cause it doesnt really suit it.