Good evening! 
I’ve decided to build this toy plane and simply want feedback
Constructive Criticism Is Appreciated 
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it doesnt look like a plane, more like a cannon, shapes dont match up really well, not too great contrast
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That does not really look like a plane. Looks more like a submarine on wheels.
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Well, you can also say it that way
If this is your first time making something like this, it’s a good start. Always have to start somewhere. I’d lengthen the wings and the body a bit and add a rudder to the back of it to make it look more like a plane. (Unless it’s there and I can’t see it). Also, make the cockpit part a bit smaller and towards front.
The thing is with this build is that I rushed it, and I simply wanted to post something on the Devforum, haven’t posted in a bit.
Thank you 
, but it’s not my first.
EDIT: didn’t realize you were mentioning about the plane, thought you were talking about my skills as a builder.
you should honestly use blender for modelling(or other modelling software), using roblox for it just makes it unoptimized and weird.
Hmm, I think try making the wings bigger and the wheels smaller as the planes wheels are small!
That’s not low-poly. That’s medium poly. It’s a common misconception, but your plane is just in a cartoony style. It’s not made in Blender either. Tags aside, just move the windows a bit more forward to the propeller.
But low poly assets doesn’t need to be made in blender in order to be low poly.
It doesn’t look like a plane. The colors don’t work, and it looks cartoonish. Plus, it’s not low-poly. No offense.
Just like ice said it looks like a cannon. I think you should of added more detailed and maybe remove the cannon style.
I can somewhat a see a plane. I think you should move the cockpit more towards the front and slim out the back. It would still be low poly, but I feel like that would help it gain it’s shape better. Maybe change the position of the wheels. Kind of like this?:
Being cute and round is not low-poly. Low-poly is to say that something takes a (subjectively) small amount of polygons. A model that is styled low-poly which has over 1.5k polygons but looks like it has less is forgivable, though. This is not even close to low poly due to the fact that Roblox unions are not optimized well and take more polygons to look right, too. The reason I said that it wasn’t made in Blender is because the post’s creator has wrongfully added the tag there. Otherwise, you could have easier control of the polygonal flow in programs such as Maya or Blender.