Made a new GFX what should I improve?

Hii made a GFX any feedback would be appreciated!

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Very nice GFX. There are a couple of things I’d like to recommend. First, the background, I think it would be better if you added some backlights to make it a little bit brighter, and add some decorations like plants or flowers to make it more lively. Next is the text, make it centered and I think reducing the space between the letters would make it better (?), and you could add some shadows to it.

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The chipletti is a watermark.

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The first thing I looked at is the text, it seems a bit off and too close to the character. Like said by another person, the background is quite boring and it looks like the chef is a child? (no idea if intentional)
Try to find some tutorials to use blender and maybe add some normals to the chef’s clothing which would make it look better.

Simplified:
Better background
Larger character
Text too close to the characer
Holding the bowl weird

Edit: Ignore the text ones, didn’t know it was watermark lol

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It is a very nice gfx! good job!

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I liked your ballerina more, but this one is great too… as others have pointed out the back lighting is crucial, i would make it much brighter in the background like real kitchens are always very well lit.

Good work!

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Nice gfx! I love it!

I would recommend changing the posing of the character, putting him a bit more to the center so most of the focus will be on him, and making the kitchen a bit smaller because it makes me feel like the character is some minion lol.

But again, its a lovely gfx, keep it up.

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