The render looks clear so far, but u should try to make some smooth moves to the characters. And try to change the title look because it doesn’t match with the Gfx. 
It looks too bright and over-exposed, try making it darker or lower the exposure possibly.
Alright so, I think the render isn’t worth 300 Robux yet. It has some potential and could easily be made better. Here are some ways to improve the quality.
• Add a more creative angle that isn’t just a birds-eye view. Maybe a side angle that still shows all of the people.
• This is a big one for sure. To improve the quality of the characters in particular, bend their limbs. An easy way to do this is to use a rig. Here is a good video to help you out with that: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqbTPSK_G-4
• Better lighting will also help add flavor to your renders. If your using Blender you can easily find a good tutorial for that!
Hope these helped you to improve! I would love to see your work in the future, keep up the good work!
The lighting in my opinion ruins the scene. It needs more shadows and also make it less bright. Good otherwise.
It’s nice but it’s honestly a bit bland. I love the text and font and everything else though.
The text is just my watermark so its not stolen.
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I would personally decrease the lighting, it looks a bit too bright. And if possible, add the textures in for the map, it really adds something to a scene, of course make sure your customer is happy. Great job, I like it!
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what do you mean by this? Also thank you for the advice.
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Make sure that the map has textures, grass, wood, etc. You used smoothplastic for the objects in the map, which is fine but to make a better looking render you should make sure the objects have textures.
This is the map which was requested to be rendered. Thanks for the advice though! 
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I understand, most importantly is to make sure the customer is happy. And your very welcome, thanks for listening to my feedback.