Hi, This is my third post related to my solo project.
As you can see, the image conveys a sense of being trapped in a body of water. While I’m not a expert in graphic designing by any means, I have created a few in the past.
Anyway, I love to hear some ideas for further tweaking.
Really plain. It doesn’t convey the fact that you’re trapped underwater. I can’t tell what this is supposed to be based on the thumbnail.
I enjoy the ratio/framing and the glitchy effects. To note something to change, the text could use a shadow or outline to be more visible. I prefer that 2nd image, and by a long-shot. That said, the “blue” can be difficult to read.
Adding caustics might make the water look more, well, like water, but it would also complicate the image. The 2nd image looks more like water compared to the 1st image. It also appears as though you’re using two different fonts. One for “Abyssal” and one for “Blue”. I’d make them the same font, size, thickness/boldness, and only change the color.
To be honest, it was rushed. And you can see by these examples they were just tests.
Thanks anyway!
I am glad you enjoy the artistic choice.
As I responded to another comment, I don’t think I put more effort into the context regarding the title and game itself 
So with that in mind I have some work to do.
