Made my first Game Title! How's it look?

Made this commissioned game title for a game called Finia the other day. How’s it look?

Finia Game Title

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That’s impressive if that’s your first try! I really like it :smiley:

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Thank you! Yes, it is my first try at this specific kind of thing lol I usually do icons/logos & things in Photoshop, but yea

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For a first time, its pretty good, however…

Everything but the text and clouds are low resolution.

The clouds don’t fit with everything else in my opinion. Like, the way the clouds look compared to everything else.
The grass and most things in the grass have gradient and proper shading to them, but the clouds are just flat colors and cartoony shading.

And the copy-paste everywhere is really obvious.

And then, finally, In my opinion, if you’re doing commissions, you should use your own assets unless the asset your using is a base asset, like an outline for an image.
(I found the cloud you used on google in a minute)


Again though, that is my opinion, and opinions aren’t facts and don’t have to be followed.

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Noted. Thank you for your feedback! Now that you say that yea I do see the clouds are not really that fitting