I have been working on this map for a while and was wondering if you thought it was ready to sell. I’ll provide some close up images and some basic map images below. If you think it is ready to sell, please tell me how much you think that it is worth, if not, what could I do/add to make it ready to sell?
the map can be played here; MapBuild - Roblox
If you see this and want to buy it; contact me and we can negotiate a price
discord; @absolutelybagel#1962
You seen made a soo much well done work and probally waste soo much time making this! Its incredible. I loved the cartoon style and the low - poly buildings. But its a little tiny. And I think you will need a buyer that are making a game with cartoon style. Pre-made maps are pretty hard to sell. But yeah its ready to sell.
The overall map looks nice! (only if I had R$ I would buy it)
You could add some more buildings and structure as it feels a bit empty.
It does feel ready to sell
Thanks you! I really appreciate it, and I hope to find a buyer. I realize that pre-made maps are hard to sell, and the last one took a few weeks, but building maps is a whole lot of fun, so I really don’t mind.
Thanks! I may add some more buildings, it’ll be good practise for blender. You should start building and selling maps, it’s very fun and you can make some R$
So far, its really nice! I do, however, have some feedback.
The building
Although the one building you do have is nice, I feel like your having only one might make it hard for you to sell because the buyer would probably end up adding more buildings anyways. I cant really critique the building itself, though, because I don’t really have a good point of view from the screenshots you provided. If you could add in some screenshots looking directly at the building that would be really nice.
The… lake?
I don’t really know if this is a lake or what, but its looking REALLY unnatural and kinda bothering me a lot. I can see from the rest of your map that you’re going for like a Adopt Me, or Life in Paradise kinda feel, but even those have more realistic looks to them. This is going to sound offensive, so prepare yourself: Your lake looks kinda like I took a map, cut out a chunk, and called it a lake. Please don’t take offence to that. Heres a reference image that I found that would fit in well with your map:
The Road
I was going to finish this off when I noticed this:
I know this is the most unimportant thing BUT ITS JUST BUGGING ME!!! This road litterally starts from an endless ocean and ends in what I presume is a dead end sign. You can probably see where Im going with this.
In conclusion, this is a good build (better than I could make), and I rate it like a 6/10. If you take into consideration what Ive said and added or removed some things, this can be a really good build. You could sell it now if you wish, although it would take a really long time to sell and would probably not get used in any games. I want you to realize Im a total stranger from the internet so I beg of you to take everything I said into consideration with a grain, no a pint, no actually a pound of salt.
-WalkingTalkingTopHat 
I don’t take offense to anything you wrote; I asked for critique, didn’t I?
The Road
I’ll add a tunnel that the road is coming out of, it should make it look nicer. I thank you for pointing this out; originally I did not see it, but now that you point it out… yeah, kinda weird.
The Building
I am new to blender buildings. I don’t use blender for buildings often, and decided to try to make a building for the map. I made one and was tired out after that. I’ll make some different style houses, and follow some tutorials to hopefully make them look nicer.
The Lake
Not going to lie here; that’s virtually what I did. I really like that reference image and will try to make some changes to make it look more natural. I’ll work more with blender to make a dock and a boat because, although I don’t think it’s the point you were trying to get across with that reference image, I like the idea. Correct me if I am wrong, but you mean add some sort of beach around the lake and make it more circular/natural, right? I’ll make some changes to try to make it look as good as it can!
Thanks so much for the critique, I’ll make some changes and update the images if I think it looks better with the changes.
The Lake
Is this what you meant for the lake? I added a small beach with some stones around it to make it look more realistic. If there as something else you meant, please do let me know, below are some images of the new lake
This map is very good, but while toy want to sell it as a whole map, you must have more miscellaneous such as more houses. I think it’s not ready to be sold.
In my eyes the houses look a little too repetetive, try adding small differences to make each one unique, I think this might make it match with the rest of the map. For everything else, I love it! There’s so much depth and I could easily see this being sold for… 3k maybe? I’m not good at pricing. Anyways, good luck on your endeavors!
The Lake seems man-made, (Which technically is all roblox nature). It looks like you just put rectangles into the ground, at least try to create rounded edges. I also think you should make more processed land, because that too looks man-made. Might want to go with blender to make terrain, or use a low poly plugin (But not the front page one, that one is trash).
EDIT: Here is an example of what I mean
https://www.roblox.com/games/3956550943/Wilderness
I kinda meant to make it less square, although that does look really nice!
You have done a good job with this, but I suggest that you build some buildings and some roads, just to put some more detail in it.
Yeah. I added 2 new buildings so it looked less repetitive near the road, but I am not quite sure where I could add more buildings
This is amazing!! This would be worth 10’s of thousands of robux, as this includes such detail, and lots of meshes. However, I would encourage you to do more, and use feedback other users give, in-order to further improve this, which in-turn, would see more!
I understand that point Anthony, but although this is a simple or non simple job (decently okay for me) it wouldn’t worth over 5K unless there were a lot more features. Just the way Developing works.
Why does it tp me to another game?
Understood, thanks! Hope you keep adding more, as right now, the map looks amazing!
I believe he used some free models and the map has a virus. I did not get teleported to another game but I got free asset popups.
Edit - now when I go in I get sent to another game.
