Map review: Office center: Please rate

Good evening everyone, I recently built this for a group. Would you be able to rate it?

Note: I built this by myself. Let me know what I can improve on and add to make this build better. Thanks!!

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Quite fine. I’d rate this a 5/10. I think you could maybe make a lounge, and the exterior looks just like a box. I honestly don’t think this would be THAT GOOD of an office center. There are way too many windows, which I personally think you need to fix. Maybe a pathway to get to the building would be nice too. Despite that, it’s quite an average build.

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Thanks for the reply, I completely agree, and will use your feedback to further improve the design and interior.

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I can see under the planks, i would put a part under the planks (the color could be black or the color of the wood) that way you cant look through the planks and see the ground! I know you said rate but i was just giving some advice, but if you fixed the floor i would say 6.5/10. Hope I can help!

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I like the base design. But judging the base design only, I can tell it might not have much then what standard office designs have.
Try building spaces for a lounge, help center or something. Here; take these images for a illustration:




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Hope these help :slight_smile:

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Thanks for your feedback!! I will do that!

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The building looks very repetitive. The offices are all the same general size with the same general layout and the materials are consistently the same. Maybe try mixing it up and adding different kinds of office spaces and also change the lighting to shadow map

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I think that a big thing to add would be doors/ entrances to the offices.
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Also, if you wanted to add a more modern style, you could use thin glass and metal. Overall, great work! 7/10.

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I would give 6/10

  • There is no roof?
  • The office rooms look kinda small
  • Add furniture?
  • I would add doors to office rooms

  • The colour of the building is good
  • I really like the floor
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It looks good, but I miss some interrior. Add a few paintings, some tables, chairs, etc. I think it will turn out great! :smile::+1:

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Looks pretty good, I’m not sure about the walls of the offices being that color blue, try other colors, or a darker blue, but I really like it, 7/10!

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It isn’t the worst I’ve seen. What i’d recommend is adding details on the walls. Whether this is adding more variation in color or adding some pillars. You could also detail around the windows.

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I would give this building a 6/10, because…

  1. These walls look not that bad, but try to add more detail to them.
  2. Add some furniture to this building, it looks kinda empty without any furniture.
  3. I really like what you done with the floor.
  4. These windows are not that bad.

But, add some furniture, add some paintings, tables, chairs etc…

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I would assume he deleted the roof so its easier to inspect.

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The windows are too tightly packed especially for a building made out of bricks. The office need more depth to make it stick out more, for a brick office not much depth is needed but adding that little depth will help making the exterior much better.


If you look at this building you can easily see where the pillars are but that is lacking in your build. I like the wood flooring and the interior is nice. It’s overall a nice build,

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Too many windows, I would also add a lot more detail to the walls, for example more color. Other than that from my perspective it looks pretty decent. 6/10

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The office kinda reminded me of stanley parable office maybe take a look in to that. for the rating id give it 7/10 pretty cool woodplank floor.

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Looks neat, basic but whatever still neat 7/10 ( I don’t have more critisism :neutral_face:)

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Honestly I would give this a 6/10. To me, the offices look to boxy and a bit bland. If you like the boxy style in an office I would recommend replacing some of the offices with cubicles and leaving some space for better offices with windows. Secondly, the glass in the offices seem too thick. Thirdly, there is too much window and too little wall. There should be a bit more of a gap in between the windows unless you want it to be a glass office building. Fourthly, the place needs more furnishing like doors, tables, chairs, and decorations to make the place look more complete rather than looking dull. Lastly, I would make the place bigger so you can add a lounge and the cubicles as I said earlier or even just make a second floor all together. Overall a good start but needs a bit more details and expansions.

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Will do, thanks for your feedback!