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I don’t really know that that thing behind is, could you explain?
There are so many lines that I can’t see what’s behind the watermark. Could you care to explain what it is?
I feel like the blurred background makes it difficult to see what the logo actually is. I feel you should either go for the blurry style in the middle or a more clear version like the text as all three styles (the blurred background, the two helmets or something, the text) don’t look great together. Otherwise cool idea!
It was supposed to be a picture of spears and arrows.
It was supposed to be some kind of map of spears and arrows.
The text is very beautiful, however, I can’t really understand what the drawing is.