Metal corridor build

I made this corridor, how can I improve this?

This is my first time building something like this

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Change up the terrain a bit for the middle section, and the neon can be lowered a bit if you increase transparency. Besides that, the shape and design are good.

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Yeah, looks really good! The only thing I would change is like @shinyju said is change up the middle section. Maybe add like a non-working or something else there. Other than that 2 thumbs up!

In my opinion, it looks great! I love the fact that everything isn’t symmetrical like the floor and the thickness of the border on the neon, very bold move that many builders wouldn’t do. 10/10

Another way to reduce neon is double-parting - where you duplicate the part, change its material to SmoothPlastic and give it transparency. The inverse can also work - a SmoothPlastic part with a neon doublepart. Note that this will mean more parts, so not the best plan if you want optimisation to be a priority.

Looks great! I love the neon on the build. But one thing I can spot is some things aren’t evenly spaces apart, otherwise everything looks amazing.

@shinyju @Lxkeqz @Auiyin @novaseer @TheSeraphicDemon

Thank you for the feedback, this is my first time building something like this. I usually do nature stuff

I’ll do better next time!