Hey there!
Me and a friend of mine are working on a Bomberman-inspired game called Bomb It, but with a little twist! So this is our new logo which I made using Adobe Illustrator alone. I’m really proud of it!
Looks good! Although it seems that the reflection is in the wrong place, given that the black drop shadow is right underneath the bomb but the reflection is to the side.
For starters, the flames seem a little dark compared to the light, colorful colors on the rest of the logo. The bomb shouldn’t have that dark of a shadow if nothing else has one and that drop shadow should be darker on the right as well to match the shadow on the bomb itself. Also the drop shadows on the letters should drop from the corner of the letter instead of just sit behind it, kinda ruins the illusion(top-left of the B’s to see what I mean). Also I’m not too fond of how the glare on the bomb is pure white instead of a semi-transparent white layer. Otherwise it’s a nice logo, 8/10
Thanks for the feedback! I’m thinking of making the blob under the shadow a little lighter.
Yea! I was thinking which side to put the reflection on.
Thanks for the honest review! I’m definitely going to make the blob on the bottom a lot lighter if I am going to put it in the final version. I will also experiment on the drop shadow on the letters and the glare.
Cool design. As others have stated in other replies, the “i” looks kind of weird on top of the Roblox logo. Perhaps that can be changed? I also agree with DeepBlueNoSpace about that “blob” under the bomb. Some touches on it and it will look pretty good. 8/10
Added more brighter colours to the fire, made the shadow under the bomb lighter and changed the drop shadow a bit.
I’ll be changing up as I read the suggestions right now.
I’ll fix up the ROBLOX logo. I also changed up the ‘i’ so check it out below.
Thanks for taking your time on the images you posted down! I am definitely going to change it to a fuse (great job on it!) but personally, I prefer having the fire on instead of the spark But I will experiment on making a spark!
I changed up the colour on the blob under the bomb. Check it out below!