My first attempt at making solid animations for a loading screen.
What do you think?
- 1 - It’s absolutely awful
- 2 - Just scrap it
- 3 - It’s alright
- 4 - Great but needs work
- 5 - awesome work!
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Its smooth, it’s simple, and is entertaining just to sit and watch. People that say it needs some work should say why.
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Some of the text might be a bit hard to read for visually impaired people nevermind that, text is just too small
Also I don’t like the animation where the text bounces when that line moves at 3 seconds in
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The first animation was a bit, how shall I put it… not smooth. Plus, the type of animation the with the line isn’t as good and entertaining as maybe op wanted it.
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I think that when the cloud development bounces out, it doesnt match with the moving boxes on the lines (Idk what they are called)
Btw for whatever reason, idk if you were going for this, but looking at it feels a little unsettling, ofc that might just be me, but idk
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Thank you for sharing. I am always glad to have good feedback!
The text size shall be increased, thank you for sharing some concerns and suggestions.
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I couldn’t get the animation to sit right with circular or quart tweens so I just went with bounce.
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It’s for a horror game, so I guess the unsettling feeling is good.? I think…
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Oh well in that case good job!
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what is that font? its super clean
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I like the idea you went with this, the animation is smooth and its satisfying to watch. It just needs a more detail to go with it, I think its a very good start just need to add more elements which you can easily find from the game your making this loading screen for.
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Believe it or not, it isnt just one specific font. I used two Montserrat, and Unica One.
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I will do my best to add some detail and filler!
It seems like one of those things, that would have some sort of background
like this
Or maybe some repeating moving background
You can see in the back there is a cool sci fi image, that doesn’t do anything, it’s just to make it look better.
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Okay! I will give this one a shot with something, any recommendations on what to put in the background?
Keep it black. It looks good especially when you’re going for a minimalistic style.
If you really wanted to add some background to it I’d say you can add a slightly transparent rotated grid for example.
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I appreciate your feedback! Always glad to see someone likes my work!
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