Mining animation I made (my first animation)

Hello, I just finished this animation, it’s my first (I also have little to no knowledge about it) and I wanna know how I can improve, or what is good about it.

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One of the first things you can improve is using the whole body to emphasize the motion. Get his hips into his swing.

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The head is kind of weird in the beginning and I feel like it’s a little slow. Also if this was real life if you mined like that in real life it would take a long time. So try making it more powerful. Like with more legs. When you animate try searching up real life items to get a nice animations. But, for your first animation this is great! Good job!

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I think it’s good for a first animation, but I’d suggest making the animation quicker. Also, that is a long animation! It’d be much easier to do a 1-minute animation, so it is much faster and easier to manage.

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Great for a first animation, but as others have said it should be a little bit quicker. Also, if the rest of the body moved with the arm it could look a lot better. When the character pulls their arm up, they could push their torso back to emphasize the amount of force being used.

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