Modern Mansion (~50 hours)

Hello.
I’ve spent ~50 hours across maybe 3 months working on this. Not very high detail but i’m intending to make it as a mission in a heist style game if I can find a scripter.

Game link here, this image isn’t really enough: Modern mansion - Roblox

I really think that I did best when it came to the home layout and execution. The building isn’t very high detail but the execution is what matters to me. It has a vault in the basement and maintenance tunnels. Trying to make a heist game w/ it. (Ever heard of entry point?)
Anyways, that’s all. Feedback helps!

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Really awesome build. Love it!

Do you mind taking closer screenshots? Thanks!

So far looks very nice and clean. Good terrain and some decent lighting. But I cannot really see the mansion that well and hope to get a better look.

First off, the amount of time you put into creating this game was worth it! It looks amazing and you should be proud of yourself for the amount of dedication you have on this project.

I have a couple of suggestions to give though:

  • If this mansion is for a single mission I would recommend not spending too much time on this part of your game, as it might take forever for you to finish the game.

  • The seats in the kitchen are too high up, it makes it seem you’re resting your feet on the counter.
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  • You should try adding a decal to the artworks in the mansion, it generates less parts, saves you time and looks good too.

  • I visited the garage and it seem rather empty, you should try adding some vehicles to make it seem more full, and perhaps other assets to fill in the space.

  • Try adding for furniture to the mansion! When I visited the place it seemed very empty, I understand you don’t want to make it too detailed however reusing simple assets for the furniture can do the trick, and besides you’ve already spent 50+ hours creating this.

Overall, it’s a great game, however you’ve spent too much of your time creating this, and if you plan to use it for a single mission you should try to hire a team to help you develop, always ask for help when you can! :grinning: