Moon Defence a cool game!

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#1

Hello today i bring u an epic game made by me! So pretty much to play is u have to destroy planes to prevent them from destroying the moon! And every ship u click on u get +50 score. So if u do play this tell me what your high score is! Anyways have fun!
https://roblox.com/games/7239633254/Moon-Defence
also i’ll be in the game, so if u want to have a chat or something then feel free to.

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#2

The game doesn’t appear to be in a working state right now. Video
Nothing comes on the screen and my health just goes down to -30 before saying game over.
Edit: After rejoining the bug appeared to be fixed. You’ll want to look into that because if someone plays the game and nothing happens, chances are they aren’t going to want to play again and they’ll just move on to a different game.
Gameplay wise there isn’t really much to do. Clicking on rectangles as they come on the screen gets boring and repetitive very fast. Not much else to say there, it might be okay for a minigame but not fit for an entire game.
Visually there isn’t much interesting about the game. The UI is basic and doesn’t really add anything interest-wise to the game. Another issue with the visuals is the lack of contrast between the background and the planes, since it can be hard to make them out if they blend in.

#3

for some reason it works for me? Maybe try rejoining?

#4

Are you British, because if you are not then it is spelled Defense. “sorry”

#5

Cool game, haven’t really seen something like this on Roblox.

As for feedback;

  • Maybe develop some game themed user interface. (Sci-Fi themed maybe)
  • A global leaderboard

You could create a whole arcade system of all games like so and maybe even build a community around it. Nice game. :slight_smile:

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#6

Alright i’ll take that into consideration

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#7

Good little game you got there.

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#8

Pretty unique idea and style but I do dislike the gui font a little bit and the gui stats is not positioned correctly as you can observe:

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This game is pretty addictive but there is a few things that need to be taken into consideration:

  • You need to feel like the players are earning something since you’re just repeating the same thing with no rewards.

  • Make a shop, expand the game-play and make it harder each level, that way your players will be engaged in the game.

  • Add a hit-box to the planes

  • If possible, add mobile-support.

Other than that, I don’t think anything else needs to be taken other than the few things I just mentioned above.

#9

The game is a cool idea, but the game is not in a good playable state as of right now, there needs to be a lot of changes and it has lots of bugs.

Let me show you what I mean:

  • Sometimes I can’t click the “plane”.
  • The UI’s look pretty blank.
  • If you die you can sometimes have negative HP.
  • The gameplay is pretty boring.
  • Rejoining doesn’t fix the negative HP bug.
  • Your screen sometimes just turns black and where you can’t do anything.
  • The game is just boring as a whole.

I’d recommend you add / fix these things over to the game:

  • Better hitbox.
  • A 3D moon model.
  • Better Explosions FX.
  • Unique gameplay features.

And a couple of other things you’ll have to think of yourself.
Please take this into consideration as otherwise there is a 99.999% chance your game will fail.

#10

i dont have plans for it to go anywhere i just made it for fun, but i’ll still take that into consideration

#11

You have a typo in the name: Moon Defense*