Hello again, im wondering what my lobby and winners should look like i know they dont look great as i wanted to finish. but what should i add i dont have any ideas, do you?
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I have not played the game, but right off the bat I can tell you a few things you should change.
The overall designs of the rooms are fine, however, the aesthetics are severely lacking in both. For one, the text on the wall does not fit with the overall minimalistic, plain look of the room, and the black on purple looks kind of strange in my opinion. Maybe try putting the text on a sign on the wall.
Second, the walls could use slightly more detail. Experiment with different textures, or feel free to look at references. Everybody uses them!
Third, the ROBLOX statue in the lobby does not fit with the room in my opinion. If you put it on a table, it may be more fitting.
Finally, the red strips in the winner room just stop randomly. In my opinion, they should continue to the end of the hall, but this is of course up to you.
I can tell this might be one of your first games, and to be honest, your build is looking a lot nicer than my first builds, and I applaud you for that. In fact, the pictures makes me want to play the game. Nicely done.
EDIT: Of course, take this criticism with a grain of salt. I do not know the genre of your game, as I am not near a computer to test it out, so I myself am not sure what you are going for.
I would probably not use the free models.
Yep my first build, thanks for feedback
It is a game where you say the color seen on the wall in front of you, very simpl but im proud of it
they will be removed in future just wanted to add something for know only the chest and sign is a model rest was built by me
So looking at your feedback, i will add more textures to make it look better.
the roblox statue was just for some more color will be removed in future and replaced with other stuff
i havent fully finished the winners room i wanted to know what people thought first
Here’s some things I think you could improve on:
Looks
There’s a lack of details the the lobby and winners area. It feels like I’m standing in a empty room. You could fix this by picking a theme/aesthetic for your game to be based around. Since your game is based on colours, you could maybe make the rooms look like a art gallery or a painter’s studio, with easels, paintings, and paint spills throughout the game.
The shapes of the rooms made it obvious that the wall was just one part stretched all the way to the end of the map. I think you should made the lobby and the winners area bigger (or at least wider), it feels like a hallway rather than a room. You could make it bigger, add more details, have a door and some windows to make it feel more natural, or whatever else you’d like to add to the lobby of your game (It’s the first thing people will see, after all!)
Other Stuff
There were a few little things I noticed while playing.
Conclusion
For what looks like one of your first few builds, it’s not to bad. A few things here and there, the rest is just a lack of details that could help liven things up in your build. (And I know one of the first things I made wasn’t a fully funtioning game.) I’ve been building for at least 5 years now, and I know the only way to improve is just to keep working.
I wish you luck on finishing your game!
thank you i am currently working on fixes, i will update the game late tomrorrow then ask for more feed back
So, I have some criticism about this.
Lobby Criticism:
The lobby room should have maybe some more space to let the player “breathe”, also, I would add some more light and remove that text from the wall (instead you could add a GUI saying that when the game loads the first time, then I would remove that ROBLOX logo, as that has no sense what so ever and maybe put there some better decoration, the robux donation chest can stay there, even tho it takes a lot of space and the signs are good.
Winners room criticism:
So, the winners room length is nice but you should make it larger on the sides. You should consider that someone just finished your game and you want to give him a reward, such a badge, also the text at the end could be put on some sort of board or something else and the room could be filled with more stuff as it feels really empty and personally it does not seem a winners room to me
I think that you are able to fix this and I wish you all the luck to make this look gorgeous.
Good luck 
Its decent for a first build, however try resizing the UI and make it a bit smaller.
