Hy guys!
I’m here to show my MORENA animation, inspired by a clip of a song by my favorite singer (Morena is the name of his song), I made it especially in honor of my favorite singer (Luan Santana). I had already done this animation a long time ago(the full version is on my tiktok). I hope you like it, thanks for your attention.
The subtitle is in Portuguese, I’m from Brazil, but you don’t need to read to understand, focus on animation. Grateful for the attention
(This video has no intention of promoting my profile, I’m just showing my animation)
I edited the topic and put the full version of my animation.
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you can see the hair lol, the sound not very dynamic, nor is movement, and the camera movements aren’t smooth or they are jumpy, but overall pretty good
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The hair on the front was on purpose, because he has a front part of his hair falling forward. The sound I tried to fit the best way, I thought it was good. Thanks for the feedback, this was my first and only animation(Im builder). This is the final part of the animation, so in this part I made this transition from 3 person to 1 person maybe that’s why it didn’t stay long smooth.
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the animation is pretty good but what was happening at the end of the animation?
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The man who was sitting in the chair, he is a policeman and had been kidnapped by this group of thugs, because he had arrested a bandit who was part of their group. So they put him in that chair, and arrested. He manages to find his car keys on the table behind him, and manages to grab it and use it to break free, and beats everyone up, but MORENA(the woman who shows up to be shot) gets shot saving him, and she dies.
Thanks for your feedback!
I edited the topic, and uploaded the full version of my animation.
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I edited the topic, and uploaded the full version of my animation.
I lov it, but it took time to load because my internet having some problem
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Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it!
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i see. for some reason your entire animation (well mainly teh first video actually) looks like a lego stop motion linear animation, and its never ever like that irl. and as i said you have some weird camera movements and stuff.
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I see what you mean, both in the part of looking like a lego stop animation linear animation, as in camera movements. It’s great when someone makes constructive criticism, so we can see some mistakes we didn’t notice before.
Thank you for taking the time and seeing my animation, and thank you so much for your feedback, appreciate it!
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