My 3rd try at music

Music info:
Title: Midnight Moon Away
Lengh: 43secs

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Uhm, I’m not sure how to respond to this.

It sounds like you are just using pianos and some other things.

Add more detail and I’m sure it will be better!

Note: this isn’t a hate comment/post, I’m just sharing my opinion and I think its a bit eh but can do better.

edit: It started good at first until you kept spamming like “ding ding ding ding” and it got really annoying and started not to sound great.

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I wouldn’t be able to make even this. Altought, its random. I don’t like it, the start was good, the rest seem like every piano player in ROBLOX GOT TALENT,
Keep working
You can get better by practicting!
:wink:
Have an awesome day!

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The music’s great! Just one thing…

If you keep practicing at it, you can be a better musician!
Good luck! :smiley: :+1:
Edit: Though since this is your 3rd time, I’m okay with it. It just sounds original!
You play better than me! :open_mouth:
Eventually, you might become an angel at music!!! :innocent:

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What are you using to make this?
I’m not skilled at making music but i think you struggled on this.
I recommend Bandlab.

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Yes, I agree to you. The first 3/5 seconds were REALLY good until it was just all spam and non sense randomness.

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Hey, @Scxiptifyz! :wave:t2:

I just listened to the music that you shared and I think it’s alright for your third try.

However, a few stuff to say, you should try and use different software to create music rather than the Piano to improve the quality and with using other software to produce music, you could possibly achieve something way better than you could think off.

There are quite a few free music producing software but one I wanted to share with you would be LMMS, it’s completely free to use and I recommend trying it out for your own self and see where it takes you.

The best of luck! :upside_down_face:

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It sounds good, but what it lacks is the notes. What you played is something a pianist would play on one finger.

What you need to do is add some chords that could match the song. As a pianist myself, the songs I play that sound good are the hard ones. This is only your third time so you shouldn’t try to strive for perfection immediately. I’ll show you an example of what I mean.

I took your notes (with a bit of rearranging) and I added chords to those notes. This is how it sounds:

It gives more feeling to the song and brings out the theme you’re trying to convey. Again, for a third time, this isn’t bad, just corrective criticism for the future. I wish you the best of luck in your musical future!

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Completely agree to you that sounds so much better.

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i use musecore3 to make this! so its probs bad

i dont take this as a hate comment. i do agree,
as for the edit part.
i tryed making it funky then went completly if topic and went to a nght theme

It’s ok bud! Again it’s your third try, and musescore isn’t a good program to make music because of its instrument quality. I only use that program to make sheet music. I don’t know what an alternative for you could be except GarageBand (unless you wanna pay money for this because then that’s when you open yourself up to a lot of possibilities)

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I just downloaded it and my 1st thoughs.
“Pain”
i dont get the website at all, so ima stick with ym current one.