My Crazy Fun Obby!

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#1

This is an Obby I made, I am New To Roblox Studio So maybe you don’t like it but it took me too long to make it :smiley: Consider Liking the Game and Favorite it! Any Feedback?

Game Link: Crazy Fun Obby! - Roblox

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#2

I have some suggestions :smiley:

  • Make the respawn time 0 (game.Players > Properties > Respawn Time)
  • Add music, Any type of music.
  • Use a theme. Most obbies have a selected theme (color - so, grey or smth.)
  • Remove admin etc. It makes you look worse. (By etc I mean VIP. I can put fire on myself and stuff.)
  • Add alot more obbies
  • Maybe have a button system?
  • Have more moving objects

And what not. Aside from that. You’re doing good for a first game :smiley:

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#3

The game is a simple good start into game development! :smiley: I have a few suggestions to help you to hopefully improve this game, and use it for any future games.

  • Theres too many bright and clashing colors in one area! Try to make every stage have a theme and a smooth transition between colors. Having the stages and the entire game a random assortment of primary colors looks very clashing and unappealing to the eye.

  • As @AsynchronousMatrix stated please fix the Respawn time to 0! This will make dying a lot less annoying and more seamless. Its almost essential in any Obby game.

  • One fatal flaw in most “Mega fun” Obby games like yours is how repetitive some stages will get especially as you add more stages further on. Use more unique mechanics in your stages like moving platforms, spinning kill blocks, ice blocks, etc. This will make your game more investing for the players. Try to make more unique stages like you did with the lava stage!

  • Try to make your kill blocks universally identifiable. For example, most regular players would automatically identify neon blocks as dangerous. Your kills blocks right now are usually red blocks, but sometimes differ between levels that can be quite confusing. Your kill blocks also being plain red blocks may get them confused with other parts of the level with a red color that don’t kill you. (Definitely change the colors of your lobby/starting place)

  • Add music like @AsynchronousMatrix stated! This will again make the game more immersive to the players.

Don’t forget to take a look at any other Mega Fun obbies for inspiration on other aspects you may be missing! Its a great start into game development and I think you have a great future ahead! Good luck, and I hope I helped! :grin:

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#4

I feel you can work on the text. And spend more time on the posing of the NPC. That’s all i think, good job!

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#5

Thx For The Feed Back I will add these :smiley:

#6

I haven’t had the chance to play this yet, but it looks quite good for a start. What you need for an obby is your own feel you get from your obby.

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#7

Thx For The Positive Feed Back :smiley: I will add these Things + I added a music before but unfortunately It was taken Down Because Of Copy Right, Music was Alan Walker Spectre NCS Release

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#11

Your game is pretty good, i recommend adding Stage leaderstats. And u could add more details to the GUI’s. This advice didn’t come from a professional. I’m saying this because i did that too. I’m not a professional as i said because I’m also new to Roblox Studio. And this is the Obby i made. U could go check it out for some ideas. The Obby : Fun Obby! - Roblox

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#12

thank you for your feedback!, It’s really appreciated!

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#13

When I saw the notification I actually thought Russo Replied :rofl:

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#14

Lol, i wish i was the real one :smile:

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#15

This looks nice! I would lower the FOV in your camera when taking thumbnail pictures for your game though.

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