My favorite stage in my new game

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#1

The stage I had the most fun working on in this game.

robloxapp-20221001-1229247.wmv (6.3 MB)

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#2

Could you upload a clip or some pictures?

#3

I uploaded a clip, maybe it was not visible for you.

#4

I add the video to my youtube channel so you don’t have to download the clip to view it. I updated on the original post up there.

#5

Hey. I had a play of your game. Well done on making the game. Can I add a couple of suggestions:

  1. The game music is rather loud.
  2. It’s not immediately obvious what to do. Perhaps a very quick tutorial
  3. Make the mouse pointer change when you hover over an egg
  4. Add simple details to each area to lift them a bit. The first zone if very bland.

How do I increase my strength? I got lots of eggs, but strength did not increase.

#6

For the music, I tested in studio and some of them are soft even when I turn my computer volume all the way up, so I increased it. The player can tune down their device’s volume if they like.

I can add a boolvalue to the players and give them a tutorial. After that, turn it off so they don’t have to repeat it.

I’m not good at creative design and just get right to the point, so yes, my spawn zone is very bland and the noob stage is also bland because the stages will get more interesting as they go.

To increase your strength, you have to go buy them with the coins in the noob stage. Every 5th stage after that also have strength buy areas.

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#7

Odd about the music volume. I had to turn mine all the way down.

I will test the strength thing. Good idea about the bool for the tutorial.

Just had another idea. While you are popping the eggs, how about using a tween to make them wobble more and more as the unlock progresses. Players love feedback on progress.

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#8

Great idea on the wobbling. Will definitely work on that. For the tutorial, I changed my mind on the boolvalue. I’ll just make a talking waving NPC to help and it will trigger the tutorial to open with a touch event.

#9

I can’t really tell what’s happening in the video unless I’m truly just blind, can you elaborate on what is going on in the video?

#10

Floor graphic animations and avatars dancing to music playing.