My first build - a Restaurant

Greetings. I am Tengarapatu and I have been scripting in Roblox for about a year. I recently decided to play around a bit with roblox studio and make my first build! I would appreciate all sorts of feedback. Constructive criticism will be taken too, and I will note any changes stated. Anyways, thank you for your interest in my topic.

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Your time is appreciated.

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I am not a builder but I think for your first build that it is pretty cool :+1: I would probably change the GUI colour though.

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For a first creation, it looks really good but you might consider changing textures, colours and maybe decorate the whole place. Altogether it looks really good, great job!:+1:t2:

Hey. Thanks for your feedback. Do you have any ideas for interior decorations?
BTW, the textured room is the kitchen.

It looks really good for your first build, good job.

Your first build is somewhat better than an average first build. I’d change the glass to black Smoothplastic with 0.8 transparency, and make sure there are no free models or anything from Toolbox. Good luck with your amazing journey that awaits!

Yes, don’t worry about free models. Being a scripter, I’m aware about the consequences that may follow. Thank you for your suggestion about the glass. I will apply it soon.

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