I just started building and wanted to attempt something a bit bigger than a desk or a chair for my first build. I settled on a spaceship. I went for a mix of futuristic technology with current tech. It took about 2 hours. Any feedback, positive or negative, is helpful. Thanks!
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This looks really good! I don’t have a lot to say against this. Maybe make the top a little taller?
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For your first build, it’s not bad! I would try to make the landing legs thicker. It looks like they will snap off.
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Thanks, I will work on those aspects!
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It looks great! I don’t do building but I’ll still reply. In the first photo the top (The pointy bit XD I don’t know what its called, Sorry!) it looks blank and plain. I agree with @GalaxyGourmet making it taller would help improve it. I’m sure theres something else someone could come up with but, this is all I could think of. It looks good though! I didn’t say anything positive though there is a lot of things that I see right of the bat and more if I looked closer. Great job! I hope this helps!
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Its kinda nice for a first build to be honest, I would like to see more details at the top and more neon to give the tech feeling
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Stop lying this isn’t your first build, because HOLY that is good for a beginner.
You can add some more detail to it, maybe more neon lights, also maybe make it that you can sit in it?
You’ve got such great potential. Don’t forget that.
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Okay hold up, first build?
This is absolutely AMAZING for a beginner! Try adding more detail to the metal hull of the spaceship. Awesome stuff!
What a cute spaceship! The only thing its lacking is a more detailed place to land on. 
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Looks pretty decent. The neon is too vibrant in my opinion but a pretty good job none the less.
The lighting and everything is incredible! Maybe add a bit more detail to the top part, like some weird tech buttons or something like that!
Excellent work!
Im no builder but wow that is good for your first time, ive been making games for over two years and still cant build. You have a good talent and I’m sure you could go far! My only piece of “constructive criticism” would be to make the rockets nose more detailed (maybe a little taller and add a logo on the side?). Otherwise amazing job!