My first build :D

How could i improve it?

(This took me hours lol)

IMPROVEMENTS;

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It is very good!
Would be cool if you added some (better) chimney particles.
That depth of field is a little extreme in the future you might want to tone it down.

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Is awesome. Would like to see it at night because the neon.

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It looks pretty amazing for a first time builder

I approve.

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Looks good, but I think you could add a small fence around this house.

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Looks so good for a first time builder!
You should add more details.

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Looks really nice for a first time builder!

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You sure you’re a first time builder? For someone’s first time, this is quite good.

Like a comment above stated, the depth of field needs to be toned down or completely removed. There isn’t much “significance” that the DoF poses in your situation. However, maybe you could put the sun in a position where sunrays are created around the building? Maybe that would look cool for a morning scene.

What about adding little props around it as well? Like boxes, crates, barrels, tools, etc, since this appears to be some sort of small shack or hut in a rural area.

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Thank you so much for your Feedback!
I added more details now. I uploaded the images :slightly_smiling_face:

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No way this is a first build! My first build was literally so garbage haha.
Perhaps the wood on fences needs proportions, by having wider gaps, and the brackets holding the lights could be multilayered with screws, but this is doing great for a first build!

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Haha, thank you a lot!
I’ll try my best to improve it :slightly_smiling_face:

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Not sure if this was mentioned, but the use of textures instead of the default materials can really make a build pop.

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pretty nice. i don’t like how the haybales are, fences are, how you mixed in modern lighting into a farmhouse, how the world ends, and the darker brick gradient or whatever but it is pretty good

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You should try adding PBR textures to the house.

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