I just made my first cafe and would like feedback on it. 
Do suggest stuff to add to this.
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Looks pretty nice to start off. I suggest you try scaling the map a bit larger and placing more tables and maybe plants inside the cafe. Nonetheless, keep up the good work!
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It for the most part looks nice but you definitely need to change up the lighting settings for your game.
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I would say add more tables and chairs and NPCâs. Not too sure if you have this already but you can add music to your game to make it feel more lively and upbeat.
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Looks pretty good! I would add some decals, and maybe a couple more tables. You should also have better lighting. good build, though.
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Itâs very basic. I recommend changing the lights, I never recommend using PointLights for interior lighting.
Also, I think the palm trees could do some work and most of the exterior.
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Pretty basic, you should make it taller and add a second floor. The seats dont seem to match and you can add other details n stuff on the inside like paintings , ads or menus. The palm trees are very chunky, map is rather small and the dock is too far pulled back. Also, there is alighting issue inside the cafe. I would suggest adding sunrays to add to the aesthetic of this cafe. good work
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Looks pretty good for your first cafe build!
Here are my suggestions:
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Overall, the build looks pretty nice, but it looks a little blocky. My suggestion is that in later builds, I recommend trying to make the shapes a little more exquisite, just so that its a little more eye catching!
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My last suggestion is I think you should change the colors of the seats, for I think that they donât really blend with the colors of the Cafe.
Other then that, I think it looks pretty good!
Everything seems a bit flat regarding the roof and the building structure maybe try filling the cafe with a few decorations at the start it doesnât look good but lacks creativity.
Overall, the cafe looks good, The color scheme seems a bit off and dull the cobblestone doesnât match with the build consider consider sizing the part coming through the roof! I would definitely suggest adding some exterior seating to your cafe, so players know exactly what the building is as well as making it look more better.
Adding a background so the letters wonât be floating could improve it the interior looks a bit empty and plain on the ceiling and perhaps hanging lights chandelier. I feel like the ceiling and walls could use more detail on it consider adding some pictures, clocks, cafe signs and much more throw a few decorations in the cafe it would improve the overall design.
At the start I like the shape and design.
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The Outside
The outside looks decently made, but I would like to see more nature and what not. It also looks like youâre going to need to make the outdoors a bit bigger, since some players like to explore outside the cafes sometimes. I would add more nature rather than just trees, maybe try adding some of these?
- Rocks
- Flowers
- Bushes
- Different Sizes/Colors of Trees
The Cafe
The cafe itself is really well made, I really like this cafe, itâs really well built and I see you spent a lot of time and effort into making this! I donât personally like on where you put the logo of the âKoolâs Cafeâ I would put it on a wall or have it hanging somewhere rather than just have it hang on glass, because I couldnât read the logo when I 1st saw it. The walls look pretty bland, maybe try adding some pictures, or other cool things to make your walls look pretty good as well!
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