Hello guys!
I want to show you my first GFX cartoon creation! I would greatly appreciate feedback on this piece.
If anyone would like a drawing like this, you can look at my portfolio.
Cya later!
If anyone would like a drawing like this, you can look at my portfolio.
Cya later!
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Looks great! Some of the detail is a bit plain and doesn’t fit the simplistic type theme, but other then that looks good 
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it looks very playful but try adding small discreet shadows onto the drawing itself as it looks a bit odd.
good job though
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The only thing that’s bugging me is that the head is asymmetrical (note the right side is more inwards that the left side). Lines on the arts are wonky (even though it was meant to be that way, this one shows a bit lack of skills). But overall it’s neat!
I like the cartoony style it conveys and if it makes sense to use it, go for it: the drawing looks really cute! 
When making any sort of image, we must draw the reader’s attention so they know where to look at! Otherwise, their eyes will be lost and they won’t be able to fully process the image.
To do that, I would size the food down, which would draw their attention to the chef and consequently to the middle of the image, from where they will certainly read the text and process the image as a whole.
It may be because of the watermark, but at first I was a bit confused to where I should look at. Automatically I looked at it as if it was an usual text: Left to Right, processing first the donut, the chef, the cherry and only then the text.
So drawing attention to the chief would already make them know what this image is about, and the next obvious step is to look at the text, which tells them the name of the group (the most important part).
It might sound that I’m a bit too picky or that the way I looked at it wouldn’t be how a normal person would look at it, but oh well… That’s my feedback to add onto previous replies 
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I know in the next job I will be more careful not to make it happen I noticed it at the end 
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I quite like the stroke on the main titles and the cartoony feel with the cheek blushes on the chef. I can’t really see the background due to the watermark. Very nice for your first creation.
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