My first clothing pieces

[Stig_ProRacer (Stig)]

Hey there! Recently I started designing clothing, because I found it very interesting for me. Here is my first experience.

Shirts
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/9557403031/Red-Jacket-cute-y2k-aesthetic-emo-swag-cool-red

https://www.roblox.com/catalog/9557295442/Galaxy-y2k-cool-swag-trendy-purple-Shirt-hoodie

Pants
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/9557124384/Galaxy-y2k-cool-swag-trendy-purple-emo-Pants

Meme Pants
https://www.roblox.com/catalog/9557084203/Beast-Boy-y2k-aesthetic-emo-swag-cool-green

I also want to hear some feedback.

[ScenicRose (Nolan)]

Those are pretty good for your first designs!

First off, I wouldn’t use so many words in the title (some of which aren’t related and are clearly there for the search algorithm) It looks quite unprofessional.

The lineart on your designs is black, which doesn’t look that well. They should be a darker version of the color they are outlining. (I see a lot of clothing designers doing this)

The wrinkles are placed in weird places and not uniform. They should all be going in a similar direction based upon how real clothing folds work.

Usually they go in a downwards direction.

I believe that’s all.

They’re still pretty good! Don’t give up and keep up the good work! ^^