My first full build game

this game is bassicly my first build i finished a while ago and i want suggustions on how to make it better in any way

https://www.roblox.com/games/7530124480/CorruptTypess-Place-Number-29

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Problems I encountered.

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  • I recommend making the house kind of big.

  • Add more detail to the kitchen (e.x. Coffee Machine, Blender, Cut-board, Fridge, Freezer, e.t.c.)

  • Add a tiny bit of detail on the room walls we spawn in, you can add posters or clocks.

  • Make it so we can actually go outside, just in-case the house is crowded with people.

  • Make the walls kind of thicker, I can see through it if I actually go in the wall.

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I would make the bathroom smaller, the material of the ceiling in the bedroom I would put “wood”. And I would add something to the kitchen.

I think the builds are pretty good but I would consider playing with the materials and colours to make it more realistic and good looking.

It looks pretty good, although like the others said it could use some more details. It also feels a Lil cramped.

im not good with makign realistic builds sadly

i made it small because i wanted to make a short build for my first real build

i will add more details soon

i never though of the wall details

i wanted it to be inside becuase thats what i wanted people to focas on when viewing it and i forgot to set it to a 1 person server

i didnt know u can see through

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It looks good to be your first finished build, I recommend you use the block move in .1 to add more details, when I discovered this, I started to improve a lot
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thats what i used already while making it