Hello! As I seen your game for the first I would say the game is okay, But the things that I need to critise:
- Map - The map looks old too much free models I would say
- Gun Animations - The guns really having any animations and it looks like you do nothing when reloading
- UI - Needs more work
Good things:
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The idea - If the game would not doing something like “girl are better than boys” or “boys are better than girl” I think it is good idea.
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FPS framework - The FPS framework looks good but as I said “Animations” so it just need more offset work and animation work but the FPS system is good!
I would suggest to do:
- Instead of using touch part to be in team use UI, It would be more user-friendly, and if you would like to change team in game, Use UserInputService and bind it to some key.
- Sound Effects - Try to add more sound effect because the game feels like nothing is really happening
- The flag - When you claiming the flag in center of map, Add face image of the player who claimed it! You can use endpoints! More info here!
- UI - Add some UI like who have more kills or anything like that, You can inspire from arsenal where they have player images and team colors and the kills the player have
And thats it I think game just need more work and it can be good game, I should give it like 6/10