Hi there, I would like a feedback on my first GFX ! I’ve done it in blender with the ZebraRBLX’s rig that I found with a few Youtube tutorials. So please tell me what do you think of it in the replies.
Peace, Fabrice 
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the lighting looks good might wanna go closer than farther away.
-but you will get better Soon
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The lighting could be improved, as well as the camera positioning and character pose.
Here is my opinion on it.
We all start somewhere, This is an amazing start, the lighting is good. I suggest moving the logo down so the icon is level with the characters. I also suggest moving closer. The poses seem a bit basic, I suggest moving the arm on the left a bit so it looks a lot more alive.
That’s just my opinion, You may disagree. Do what you feel is right, don’t let this advice dictate what you want, use it as a reference.
Overall, Great job! With practice, You have potential!
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Lighting is Very good, in my opinion I think r6 isn’t the right body for blender. r15 does all the wiggle and you can move around and be free. (I recommend r15 next time) but since this is your FIRST gfx ever I’ll let it slide you are a starter and you’re tryna get better.8/10 in my opinion keep it up and maybe watch some tutorials they would help you make your GFXs good and better. keep it up! 
Its good for your first ever gfx.
The GFX is good, but could use some work. Add a little more lighting, so its not as dark and zoom into it more, so the characters aren’t as far away. For your first GFX, that’s amazing, I like the circle of colors! Wishing you luck and have fun with it!
A good start and it reminds me of when I first learned how to make GFX.
As someone said above, I also encourage you to consider R15.
The extra joints allow for a wider range of poses and expressions.
I inserted a past GFX I made for reference. You can notice the more realistic feeling the image gives off. 
The shadows look amazing, well done on them! A few things to improve are the camera angle and the pose of the characters. Otherwise, you did a very nice for your first render!
Good job