My First GFX! give feedback!

Hello, I am mostly a scripter but I wanted to do GFX but this is my first please do give feedback and give me opinions and whatever you can give me help on!


and I do know it looks fake and weird but my first GFX!

peace @iBandit37

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It looks good for a first Gfx, you should just add some more effects to it.

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For a first GFX, I think it’s a great start!

You may have noticed your right leg is a little ahead of your body :sweat_smile: but seriously this is a great start!

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Thanks for the feedback! :heart:

Awesome thank you really for this! :heart:

This is a great start! I can see you becoming very skilled in the future. I recommend fixing the leg as @g8m said

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Ok thank you really cause I love good positive feedback thank you really and you guys are making me better by giving me feedback! :heart:

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This is good, but you need to bend the limbs to make it more friendly. It is also good practice to use less photographs in a background image for a thumbnail.

What program did you use to make this? C4D or blender?

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Blender. I don’t know if that’s good or bad lol! :smile: :grin:

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Blender is easy to use, and free if I’m not mistaken. It’s definitely the most recommend program. This is a good start for a first GFX

Thank you really I love it! :+1:t2: :heart:

It’s a good start, but to bring up the obvious problem of your hat being transparent. Here is a simple tutorial on how to fix transparent objects in Blender 2.8.

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Thank you very much for helping me and improve!

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Looks nice but it bothers me that it looks like he’s bigger than the buildings and he’s walking on water but other than that it looks nice for your first gfx.

Tip: try playing around with the lighting in blender

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Yes! I like it, add some shadows!

When I made my first GFX it did not look this good, I think adding some effects and text could make this look even better.

(if you want to prevent the hat from being transparent after a render just open the Shader Editor and change it from ‘Alpha’ to ‘Normal’ and the hat shouldn’t be transparent anymore)

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OMG all this reply had made my day thank you for feedback! :heart: :heart:

It looks amazing for a first timer, however there are a few things I could change:
-Remove apha transparency so the hats don’t look translucent
-Match the proportions to your image. your character right now is floating above the water
-Match the lighting to the background, you can do this in post.

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I think its good for your 1. GFX but maybe in the Future
Use R15 so the Pose Looks better

Just my Opinion but good for your 1. One and maybe dont use real backgrounds for the future
you can but it dont fit with roblox characters xd

Having that as your first graphics is a great start, trust me - I can already tell that you’ll be a successful designer in no time, however, to discuss the improvements, I feel like adding text and other detail would make it nicer so we can understand what this is about, but in conclusion, it’s good for a headstart.