My first GFX rendered in blender! How is it?

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#2

I like the modeling overall, but the background is bland, and the text could be more fun. I do like the way you modeled the character though. Maybe show more emotion with the jump. Do like a mid-air jump or something. Show excitement and energy! But, a pretty solid first blender render.

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#3

Thanks for the feedback! I will make sure to do that.

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#4

Looks really good for a first attempt. A few things I would change:

  • Colours! Make them compliment each other. It kind of hurts my eyes looking at it.
  • Text! Is there an interesting font? Could you do it in 3D within the render? Something to make it stand out.
  • Same as the other comment, show emotion.
  • What’s the purpose of it? Give more information on the actual copy, if it’s a game maybe say “join today” or similar - a “call to action” is always good.
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