I’m working on a democracy monument in my country but no feedback because only 1 visitor
If someone have time, feel free to criticize my place (This is my first creation)
Democracy Monument | อนุสาวรีย์ประชาธิปไตย - Roblox ?
Here the picture of my place
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For your first creation, this looks great, and amazing! Keep it up, because it is outstanding work.
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Those steps are bothering me. I’d move them closer together.
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That looks amazing, love the colour choice and detail.
Keep up the great work
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This is the reason why those steps are too long. I try to build exactly what the original is but thanks for your feedback!
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Oh, I see now. Maybe the lighting is making it look strange.
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Looks great! Keep up the good work. Maybe fix the lighting.
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Protest sign does not work. Maybe you could fix that?
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0skarian
(0skarian)
July 6, 2021, 4:37pm
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This looks great! My first build was just a pile of yellow bricks
If anything I’d try to make the carvings on the pillars look slightly more pronounced, you can barely see them in the model.
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x5tb
(x5tb)
July 6, 2021, 5:03pm
#10
The first model I uploaded to Roblox wasn’t great
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These were from my oldest account (I still own), I mean, they aren’t bad?
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Thank for your feedback, I’ll fix it.
It’s take time to improve skills but your progress is impressive! Thanks for sharing
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In my opinion start from simple thing is better and good for beginner. I learn to build from building games so I know how to use many tricks.
Absolutely stunning! Especially for a first creation.
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Overw_rld
(Rudylicious)
July 6, 2021, 6:36pm
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Did you ever have a past experience from building before using Roblox Studio?
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Yes I do. I learned how to use tools from youtube.
It doesn’t seem very proportional to the player. I suggest importing a player model before starting your build.
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Thanks for advice! Next time I’ll try it.