My first model as a roblox developer

I’m working on a democracy monument in my country but no feedback because only 1 visitor :joy:
If someone have time, feel free to criticize my place :grin: (This is my first creation)

Democracy Monument | อนุสาวรีย์ประชาธิปไตย - Roblox?

Here the picture of my place

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For your first creation, this looks great, and amazing! Keep it up, because it is outstanding work. :smiley:

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Those steps are bothering me. I’d move them closer together.

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That looks amazing, love the colour choice and detail.
Keep up the great work :ok_hand:

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This is the reason why those steps are too long. I try to build exactly what the original is but thanks for your feedback!

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Oh, I see now. Maybe the lighting is making it look strange.

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Looks great! Keep up the good work. Maybe fix the lighting.

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Protest sign does not work. Maybe you could fix that?

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This looks great! My first build was just a pile of yellow bricks :slight_smile:

If anything I’d try to make the carvings on the pillars look slightly more pronounced, you can barely see them in the model.

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The first model I uploaded to Roblox wasn’t great :sweat_smile:
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These were from my oldest account (I still own), I mean, they aren’t bad?

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Thank for your feedback, I’ll fix it. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

It’s take time to improve skills but your progress is impressive! Thanks for sharing :smile:

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In my opinion start from simple thing is better and good for beginner. I learn to build from building games so I know how to use many tricks. :+1:

Absolutely stunning! Especially for a first creation.

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Did you ever have a past experience from building before using Roblox Studio?

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Yes I do. I learned how to use tools from youtube.

It doesn’t seem very proportional to the player. I suggest importing a player model before starting your build.

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Thanks for advice! Next time I’ll try it.