My first platform for my speed run, Key's Speed Run!

Hey everyone!

Recently I created a platform for my upcoming game, “Key’s Speed Run.”
I made the low poly terrain in Blender and the rest was made in Roblox Studio.
Please give your honest opinions on this, I’m open for suggestions!
I went with the blocky type of low poly rather than the cartoony round type of low poly.
(Yes, I did use compatibility lighting, it looks the best for the build style).

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Great work @DevKeyRBLX Keep it up!!!

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Thanks! Do you think there’s anything I should change about the build?

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Maybe add some more detail at the bottom where the stone is??

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Okay, thanks for the suggestion, I appreciate it!

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Np! Maybe make like ivory hanging off of the bottom then make it pointier!

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Ooh, that’s a good idea! Thank you!

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:smiley: No problem, Have a good day!

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Looks nice, maybe little more edges for the land

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This art style looks very unique and nice I can’t wait to play your new game! (I do suggest adding a bit more detail to it though.) :slightly_smiling_face:

Thanks! Would you like me to keep you updated about it in PMs?

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No, that’s okay just PM me when the game is out! I’ll be sure to check for updates on your DevForum profile.

I won’t lie, this is pretty good! I love the detail you put in. My only suggestion is to make one of the trees smaller.

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Very nice! As @Britain_9876 mentioned, there could be a little more detail at the bottom part, but I would like to talk about the trees. They are very nice, but I feel like they could be better. There are a lot of tutorials out there showing how to make one, I recommend these ones:

Note that they need a special free software called Blender.

I am looking forward to playing your game,
Theyoloman1920

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Hi! Thanks for the feedback. The reason I went for this style of tree was actually intentional - while I did hire someone to make trees, instead I decided I wanted to make some blocky ones and use those.

Yeah, I love how Blender is free actually. I use it a lot.

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What about adding some vegetation like grass? That would really make shine!

Yeah - there’s a plugin I found that does that, I’ll install it!

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