My First Real Build

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 2:45pm

I’ve been working on this for awhile and me and my friend (hudkoos) have started to make a map with these walls we made, I would appreciate if yall have any suggestion’s for these walls (yes this is a scp game).

These are our main walls and we are going to most likely remake the other wall we have currently made as it doesn’t look that good or fit the theme. Anyways I would like to know if you guys have any suggestions to change about these walls and any feedback on them.

Anonymous0perator · April 14, 2021, 2:49pm

These look really nice! I think they are a bit bland but the last image looks the best to me. Maybe experiment a bit more with materials, colours, and detailing. (Maybe do pipes or electrical wires). Keep working because it looks amazing!

BDASaltt · April 14, 2021, 2:50pm

With the first 2 images (grey and blue walls), I’d recommend adding a little more detail onto them. The bottom 2 images are the best in my opinion, it fits a futuristic theme. Generally, these are all pretty good.

Herxuy · April 14, 2021, 4:46pm

These look good. My only advice would be to add some more detail to them scuffs, posters, or bulletin boards would add a lot of flavor and personality to the build.

AlmightyYumzy · April 14, 2021, 5:25pm

The images look great and all that but the lights don’t look great on some and for some detail I suggest you to add pipes that will make the hallway roofs be so much better.

A1A2_dev · April 14, 2021, 5:28pm

Keep up to good work lad i might need you one day for a job

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 5:32pm

Hi, thanks if you need me you can contact me on discord.
Cman6#1596.

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 5:33pm

The lights on the blue one is currently a placeholder and I am going to change that. Thanks for the feedback.

Acu1000 · April 14, 2021, 5:33pm

First and third hallways look really good. Second one has an issue that is, the black and white stripes contrast too much and make it look too cartoony. Other than that, it’s really nice

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 5:33pm

Thanks for the feed back also I will take this into consideration.

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 5:35pm

Okay thanks for the suggestion Ill change that.

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 5:36pm

And also the other people who responded thanks for the feedback I will be making a list and I will fix it.

GolgiToad · April 14, 2021, 5:39pm

I’d try decals and transparency for that, so that the details aren’t in a noticeable pattern.

monkey13624 · April 14, 2021, 11:51pm

My Friend updated the lights for me and added some pipes, what are your thoughts?
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Tiwernik · May 6, 2021, 8:13am

Looks really good, looking forward to play your SCP facility if it becomes public.