My first showcase!

This took me around 1 - 2 hours, I would love for some feedback on what I can improve :wink:
This Was extremely hard to make for me as I’m not much of a building I’m currently taking a break from scripting as I’ve been working on a fighting game for 4 - 5 months now. But please tell me what to improve and remake! I’m currently taking creative criticism.





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To be your first showcase it is beautiful, although I realize that the glass looks strange is it because of the reflection?

nice!! i made something similar to this a while ago. you should add more detail to the floor because right now it is looking a bit empty. maybe you could add more boxes/prop objects here and there or some decals of dirt. reference images are good too!!

also, i love the little wires you put on the ceiling!! could you let me know how you did those?? i make them manually using cylinders all the time and it’s kinda tedious lol

I used the rope master plugin/Rope plugin Using the electric cable Ver.

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