My first showcase

I did a showcase, it is almost complete, I would like to add a person who makes a dialogue that tells a brief story indirectly and add some easter eggs. What do you think? has the potential not to look bad? XD
the game:
https://www.roblox.com/games/5780584423/railway-big-city?refPageId=0505fcd5-f17c-4cf4-b263-e9625c808b9d

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It looks nice for your first showcase. I noticed that the rain goes through the roof.

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oh, thank you very much, I hadn’t noticed. Is rare. I did it with a rain plugin, I’ll see how to fix it. Thank you very much

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I also took the model of the restaurant from the toolbox, as well as the stop. I wanted to remove them and build something myself. Thank you anyway

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For your first showcase, it’s pretty good! But the back wood wall isn’t anchored. And i think you need to add more invisible walls, there’s a little too much freedom. But looks good so far!

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Thanks, I already solved it. It’s weird that I didn’t realize it, because I provided it a lot of times and didn’t realize it haha. Thank you

Sorry, I meant I tried. How quickly did they think, having found out that I just uploaded it haha


All the blue signs aren’t on the wood.



That isn’t textured.



Place those seats closer together.



Part is inside the building.



The mesh pack is visible.



The wooden wall wasn’t anchored.


Ohh, thank you very much for all those details, but there is something I do not understand, what you mean by this image:

Is that a bunch of meshes that you used for the showcase?

ohhh now I understand. Miss a man to say a dialogue that explains that scene in the background. It is put and organized on purpose

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ohhh now I understand. I’ll put a man to say a dialogue that explains that scene in the background. It is put and organized on purpose

There I changed a few things. If you want come in and look at them. I do not force you anyway

I modified the train station and the restaurant, now they are all own constructions.