Hello, this is my first terrain build.
Let me know what you guys think of it.
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Thank you! :]
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That looks really nice, did you use blender or studio???
I have no complaints, but the waterfall needs some improving.
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Thank you, I use roblox studio and I will try to improve to waterfall.
This is AMAZING for a first time, although I have to agree with @FreezyMeIon that the waterfall is a bit… sharp, if you know what I mean. But thats honestly the only thing i can see that could use improving. Great job, continue what you’re doing! 
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Veryyy great for a first time. It might look better if the rock was on the same level as the grass. It could definitely work as a map if you made the main part larger. Great job.
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Incredible for the first time, though I do have to agree with @FreezyMeIon the waterfall does look a strange.
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This is very good for your first time, keep up that excellent work the waterfall could use some improvements as it doesn’t really mesh well with the part style terrain as other users have previously stated. I’m wondering how you created that water-like effect out of parts.
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As your first time making something like this, this is astonishing as a beginner on your terrain build!
With the level of detail that was put into a little island with the shapes and sizes of the grass and rocks, it looks very well detailed with the terrain water as well, I have no other suggestions with this.
Great work! 
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First attempt it looks good fixing the overall waterfall to make it more interesting could improve the overall feel try placing rocks on the sides of the waterfall so it’ll blend in more at the start the water placements look a little weird looking it could be best if you used a beam and particle emitters mist when hitting the water.
I would suggest placing a little ledge, and rocks on the island where the water would come out of mainly focusing in the middle part maybe add stone rocks so it shows where the water is coming out of as seen in the real world.
It’s a good start hope to see where you take this in the future:
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Looks really awesome! Do you plan on adding trees later on or is it just going to stay plain? I think trees would definitely enhance the image if so.
Great work!
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Thank you for your nice feedback. I use a plug in to create a waterfall effect on my build and It’s called “Waterfall Generator” by woot3.
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Thank you so much! I would definitely add some trees later on.
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Wow great use of lighting and colors! This looks great!
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Overall amazing! The waterfall could use some work though, maybe add some rocks to the bottom and an overhang over it! As waterfalls don’t just sit on the front of a terrain. Good job though!
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I must agree with FreezyMelon on the waterfall, but the island has a very nice shape and a unique design style, the sewage plant(?) is very simple and I like it that way, it fits with the rest of the island. Trees would definitely improve the scene, and maybe you can add more biomes like a small desert on the other side of the rock wall. A desert or snowy area would increase the diversity of your island, and give it more features and make it a nicer place overall!
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