I Don’t Usually make User Interface menus and i can’t really script but i made like a menu art work and was wondering your opinions.
Please note this is the first draft so it kinda sucks.
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The menu itself looks alright, the arrows should be changed as well as the letters to something a bit more creative, I do like the basic menu feel, kinda like among us, but hey it’s better than anything I’ve done lol.
Lol thanks for the feedback i will note that
Tbh not being harsh but I’m just going to say the truth. Your UI looks like as if a little person just drew some lines and typed some texts on it.
Try to do these to make it better
- Add color type texts
- Add pictures
- Make a frame where it can be seen clearly
- If you always need help, check YouTube
But eh, it needs alot of improvements. Goodluck! 
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I cannot really make a claim until you have made the UI in studio so I can see how it looks like
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This is a great first start. What did you use in specific to create?
yea it’s pretty trash. The concept looks intriguing though, and if your intention was to draft out ideas on a layout then this can work as a guide. But there are some big turnoffs to the design:
- giant outlines
- jagged intersections
- unpositioned text
- jarring size and styles of the icons
It’s important to get these elements right bc you wanna be able to translate your ideas to other developers in concepts like this. I would look up UI tutorials on youtube and looking at the work of other UI devs, I’m sure it will get you closer to where you wanna be.
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As a sketch of what a UI could look like, you definitely have some interesting ideas. I like the interesting shapes and how each button has a unique shape and size and affects the shape and size of other buttons. That being said, I would have to see it implemented in studio for additional feedback, otherwise the concept looks good!
I know i did not claim i made it in studio i said i drew it
I used sketchbook pro. I did not do a great job but i do a lot of my work there
Well just let me know when you kinda make it so we can see how everything is layed out and what you are considering final measures/designs for the UI
Okay. I will make sure to do that!
As for Paint UI, it’s actually nice.
It looks a lot like the main menu in Super Smash Bros. It’s creative, but I can’t say that it’s very good.
Great for a first try! Here are some things I recommend improving though!
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Try out different things with the text! Maybe having like a more cartoony font for example or using a border to help it stand out!
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Make sure to include whole images! Where the teleport is, make sure it’s the full thing as it looks quite odd being chopped off.
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More colour! Similar to the first one, include more colour! Currently, it looks quite dull so adding more colours would help! Make sure the colours match though and aren’t harsh on the eyes.
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Make a straight border! I don’t know if this was intentional or not but make sure that the border is straight and isn’t randomly becoming slanted, like where the report button is.
Hope this feedback helps you improve on your UI!
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Thank you! All of those suggestions are noted!
Everyone starts somewhere, stop being so hard on yourself. A mentor once told me — the master is a beginner that never gave up.
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Awesome first try! I like the 3d feel! 
It’s it’s… a start. Some people do some things better than other things, and that’s totally understandable, it’s obviously not your strong suit (No offense)
This is a quick 1 minute layout I made to show you that UX matters
I didn’t do weapon examples or all that stuff, but if you want more examples feel free to look at my portfolio located on my profile page
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First of all, no offense taken, and yea I kinda suck at UI