My First UI (Looking for Feedback)

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#1

As the title says, this is my first ever UI that I’ve created using Photoshop. I am looking for feedback and criticism.

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#2

  1. The neon text stroke makes it look a lot less clean

  2. Bezels are so large it takes away from the image, I recommend 3-5 pixel width

  3. Green’s don’t match

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#3

The UI looks fairly decent for being your first ever UI made on Photoshop.

What can improve:

  • Outlines are way too bright/bold/neon.
  • Lots of empty space, which also isn’t fairly aligned (not that important).

Otherwise, I’d say that It’s good.

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#4

It looks quite nice, however:

  1. There is too much empty space. Try making the window / box smaller or change text sizes to fill it in.
  2. The colors on the text at the top are too bright. The bright neon green on white and gray doesn’t look very appealing to the eyes.
  3. The bezels are too large. Try experimenting with smaller bezels, it could make it look much nicer and cleaner!

Overall, great job considering it’s your first time working with UI!

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#5

You UI looks very incredible, looks nice! I really love it, but the UI is kinda small. and it’s hard to me see PURCHASE SUCCESSFUL! by the green neon in the border, i think you can make it smaller, but everything is ok! :heart::+1:

#6

I think the GUI looks pretty nice! Good job. However, I have some suggestions for improvements:

  1. The corners of the Frame is too roundish in my opinion, try to reduce a bit to make look more modern.

  2. I was having a hard time to look at the texts because I’m on mobile. You adjust the TextSize of texts so that mobile players can see the message clearly too.

Other than these, it’s pretty good! :smiley:

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#7

Thank you all for the feedback. I will defiantly be improving this soon.

Much appreciated,
imerchanti.

#9

I think the UI looks pretty good, though I believe rather than having that green glow around the top part, just make the color of the letters green. Otherwise, very good.

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#10

It looks really nice! There are a couple problems :

  • Not rocking the text outline
  • Fix some text colors to match the background theme
  • Rescale background. Just a little but smaller

Hope you do well on Roblox! :star_struck:

#11

Pretty solid for your first UI but:

  1. Get rid of the space below purchase ID or fill it up with something instead of leaving the space blank.
  2. Get rid of the strokes, or adjust the color/size to make it less noticeable.

Oh lol I just realized this is like 9 months late, no idea why I saw it.

#12

Hey there!
Overall, great job. The background matches nicely with the overall “Robux” theme.
Some things I’d consider changing or revising:

  • As @reteach mentioned, the neon stroke makes the text look less clean, and I’d even say it makes the text harder to read. You could maybe try a gray alternative, but I’d say just remove it.

  • The text is very small. I don’t know what the size of this will be in your project, but if it will be positioned the way it is on the white background, I would consider making “You have purchased a monthly subscription of” and Purchase ID text bigger.

Overall, it looks pretty great to be the first UI. Keep going and good luck!