My first UI with figma (simple loading screen)


So hi, I made my first UI ever with internet. Just a simple loading screen (frame is white cause in my game, there’s a frame covering the white). What do you think?

Also, I made it basic by purposes.

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decent, but it could use some design

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i made it basic on purpose, that why theres no real design

It doesn’t feel centered and that looks weird, but for your first Loading Screen it’s pretty good! :smiley:

its alright but like i dont get it, first off circles are too big, second off remove the email, you can’t reach everyone. link some type of support game or something.

second, its not centered at all and the image aspect ratio is weirdScreen Shot 2021-10-30 at 2.34.44 PM
and then the circles should be animated

What’s the scaling of this?
Here’s a few suggestions:

  • “We are currently loading the game” is not necessary as that is implied by the loading icon.
  • The font should be another color, I feel like it stands out too much.
  • Those dots are way too big.

I think it is supposed to be a more standard aspect ratio, I see the Figma page background here. Also @IceTheOneAndOnly you can’t really animate stuff like that in Figma unless you want to make a ton of frames.

First of all, center all the circles and the text below it.

Your watermark would look better if it was 5 width and 5 height.

Really bad, seems like something made on paint.

This isn’t very helpful. You have not outlined in any way how this person can improve.

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The dots are misaligned, or maybe it’s the text below the dots. Either way, it looks off, and also putting your email in a game is a clear rule violation, so I’d just delete that part if you were to actually use it (I know that isn’t your real email but…)

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I’m not using it for a game at all. I’m just training. Sorry for not responding, I logged out during the outage so when I tried logging in, yep, didn’t work.

dont understand how the ratio matters

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it matters because well if you have incorrect padding and ratios your uis won’t look as good and stuff
but really idk its just nothing is centered

Pretty good for a first. It feel like they aren’t in the middle and the dots are way too big but it’s pretty cool!