Hello this is my first VFX, I’m looking for feedback from the community.
What are the pros and cons of this VFX?
What are ways I can improve in general?
Scripting Wise and Visually
https://gyazo.com/c5fb4e4dfdbcb10ae2fa1861527032c4
https://gyazo.com/8337667de9759f9186b857896de1f584
Looks really good, the only downside is that it is anime. Everyone likes different things, the VFX and concept is really good, but I don’t like anime. This doesn’t need to be changed, just me ranting about anime.
Penguin 1 - 0 Anime
This is something I normally never see on newcomers
This is amazing to put it short it’s clean and has color that matches with the surrounding
It also creates the clouds in the background which is amazing attention to detail
Well done!
I see where you are coming from, but I am curious what exactly do you dislike about “Anime”?
Thank you! for the feedback By any chance have any cons?
I don’t really like the fact that people can get addicted to it and for some it impacts them heavily. Great work though!
Not sure but one could be the clouds causing lag
Looks cool, I’m pretty sure that’s Zenitsu’s animation?
Well, anyways I know that the dash is supposed to be instantaneous but I feel like the player shouldn’t instantly travel to the destination, a little fine tweeting between points would be good imo. 
For a beginner this is some impressive work!
Thanks For the Feedback! How’s this!
Correct, It is Zenitsu’s Animation
https://gyazo.com/736da8a5cd55e84fad56d5a743ebba0b
Current New
https://gyazo.com/fff8448e36b330771af1c0b68f7fd4ab
It’s terrifying how easily people can get addicted to it. It’s not bad, it’s just addictive.
I’m pretty curious on how you made the clouds change like that.
Is it some sort of particle effect or is the skybox actually changing?
No the skybox isn’t changing, although it was a great guess it’s as simple as adding “clouds” to “Terrain”
For the effects You will want to use “Tween Service” or Your own methods of changing Values, The property’s you will want to change is “Cover” and or “Density”
I never realized this was a thing, thanks for the tip!