Can I have some feedback on my forest showcase I worked on. It took me about 30 minutes.
https://www.roblox.com/games/5097059011/Fall?refPageId=a693e44d-0127-4063-976f-6c023b57a3b5
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Looks nice! I really enjoyed it. Keep working hard.
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Thank you! I will continue working hard.
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I like it! Keep It Up! Question: What’s with the two black bars? Is it supposed to be a cinematic scene or something like that?
Feedback:
You Could Add Rain Splashes On The Ground In My Opinion
& Some Sunrays Perhaps If you’re going with a realistic look
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It’s a good build If I’m not mistaken the forest is still in development? As the rest of the area is too flat.
Forests always have more objects - vegetation, and to make a forest is honestly by adding vegetation height of trees. The trees seems a little repetitive considering that there going to be variety of trees added to your showcase, and the grass itself fits the theme your going for maybe some leaves to the ground could work.
The trees, look good. Well done. I would place some rocks to the ground giving it more life.
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It’s… BEYOND AMAZING, I love the quality & the sky also the grass to the terrain is perfect!
AMAZING 
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Yes it is still in development! 
Yes it is post to be a cinematic scene, and if you look close on the ground there is rain splashes. 
This looks so good!!! Even on Graphics 1, it still looks amazing! Keep up the great work!
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It looks really good man. Although the sun rays are separate from the sun, so it looks like there are 2.
You could try using the Set Sun plugin, not sure if you used that or not.
Here’s a good one:
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Good idea thank you so much! That probably will help me out a lot.
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I will definitely add some more vegetation to the next update.
I updated the game! Fall - Roblox
Looks good not much to comment on. Should add music but when I entered the game I saw unspeakable things that I will never forget. good stuff
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It’s well done, The only problem in my case is that every time you move(at least for me) You see your bodyparts on the screen.
Otherwise, It’s great!
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The Place
The showcase overall is remotely beautiful. I cannot put into words on how good this is. This models are neatly well made and the lighting is perfect, this is a swell job, and I hope to see more of these from you in the future.
The place did seem bland kind of, I would add some other things to make it better.
- Some sort of broken down building or house
- More bushes
- More Rocks
- Flowers
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Ok, thank you for your feedback I will definitely implement that in the next update!
I like it. Atmosphere comes together well and I like the color coordination.
It looks very good, but I noticed that the sun rays flash sometimes they go on/off, can you fix that?