Hey! I’ve just released my new game Trapped in! please can I get some brutally honest feedback.
Thanks!
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Just shutdown the server for a bug issue, sorry abt that.
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I like it, however the last button is impossible to find. I reset in the support room as I thought that may give me something, but it ended up resetting my button count and no buttons worked anymore.
I really liked it either way.
Oh gosh, you just reminded me! I forgot to disable reset. Thanks for the feedback tho!
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Your welcome! Sorry I took so long to write, I was busy playing the game after you fixed the bug! Haha.
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It a good game idea but I feel you tackled it the wrong way. There is no clear objective until u start fumbling around testing things. I am currently stuck on 3 buttons left with no idea what to do. The jumpscare caught me off guard though and it made me jump. I think with the notes you should be able to close them whenever you like rather than after a time limit as with the first note it disappeared before I finished reading. The models are very well made and the scripting is functional. Overall this is a good game idea but poorly executed and rushed. Take your time when making games and put in maximum effort. Also plan your games before you make them (Maps, levels, button locations, storyline, etc) and make sure it is not confusing as I have been confused the whole time throughout. I’m sorry for being negative I don’t like being negative but you asked for brutally honest feedback. Well done on releasing the game though 
I see clear potential in you for making games and I feel like if you try make a sequel with these thoughts then your game will be very successful.
Hey! Thank you for the feedback.
I used to have a story line in the intro and a settask, but I removed it because it took a full 30 seconds and it would be boring.
I’ve never used user input service to idk how i’d make it so notes close whenever.
All model credit goes to @Kyodoru for building them.
- Frazer [SimplyFrazer]
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Also if you’d like some help finding the buttons let me know, so you can see the end of the game xd.
The only thing at the end is a police cut scene that says part 2 coming soon xd.
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i need help with the last button i think i need to find the box one or the railway track one
Rail way one is on the rail way, obviously, and it’s one of the grey tracks things, idk what they’re called lol
Railway:
ok thank you, also the stair one is very random
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You can just use a textbutton if you don’t know user input service, its just as effective
The game’s always in first person, meaning that the mouse will be centered and un-moveable.
oh yeah my bad lol 
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It’s decent but I feel like it lacking some sort of instructions or context. You’re just thrown in and asked to find 10 buttons with little info. The flashing lights were cool but I don’t exactly know why they came on. One big problem I found was that once you went through the glass to the managers office, you couldn’t get back and then because you cant reset, you just had to leave.
Wait, you can’t get out? How come? Was their a wall or something blocking the player?
I think I fixed it.
Yeah you’ve fixed it. Before the glass was solid and it was hard to get you avatar at the right angle to get through it. I’ve now got two buttons left. I know one of them is on the stairs but it doesn’t do anything when I click it. Still can’t find the other one though
Edit: As soon as I posted this I found the other one. The stair one still doesn’t do anything though.
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Hello again, i’ve added some new features to the join menu.
The story line section should give some more context on what is going on.
I also added a shop menu so I can make some robux lol
Hi, i just played your game. I have no idea what to do or where to go and i cant see a thing. Thats all i can say right now.
-Tjieko
Use the flashlight. 