My new gfx of a guy (me) in a... bamboo jungle?

Today I spend many hours doing this gfx. I want to know what thing I can improve because I want to add this to my future porfolio, so you can tell me what things I should fix or if it looks decent. Thanks!

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The sky is blank, add more details. Other than that it’s ok. 7.5/10

It looks like a patch of bamboo on a grassy baseplate. Try adding more bamboo to make it seem like a forest. And maybe add some variation in the bamboo, e.g. broken bamboo, bamboo on the ground, etc.

better now? I’m trying to fix the more things as possible

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Much better. 10/10 300000000000

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There should be more stuff closer and around the character, I have a hard time believing there would be that big of an open space in a Bamboo Jungle. The lighting is pretty good

ground seems to reflective, you can either bump up the roughness on the grass
Orr use a grass pbr material

Both pants and shirt have the same color, I feel it weird. However, it still looks good!

I suggest you add a bit of depth of field to make it better

Looks awesome. I’d say you can work on the lighting a bit.

If the pants and the shirt have the same colour it’s because they are an outfit that I found on a great clothing group. I didn’t want to put the shirt from an asset and the pants from a different one. Still, I tried to make the clothing like in a 3d mode but It was to hard for me. Anyways, thanks.

I like it, but I think that you should make the ground more 3D since there seems to be grass and that it just looks like he’s walking on a plane. Maybe add more plants on the ground? It is a jungle after all!

Try to use a hair particle system to make some grass or use a displacement modifier on the grass. (Make sure to save before doing this)

Humm, that’s right! I’ll add some grass the next time.Thank you for the suggestion!
The ground… I tried to make it more 3d but It didn’t work so… I’ll just keep practising