I just made this piece of music, I would love on how can I improve it.
It’s called " Super chill music in town" and I used Strofe to make this. If you reply with constructive criticism and tell me how to improve it, thanks! 
(Notice: The name used to be Grand city in ruins but I’m changing it)
and here’s the newest version:
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It sounds great! I would mainly use it in an adventure game, or just as ambient music.
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I feel like the beginning part song doesn’t fit the title. It sounds more like you’re strolling through a park or something.
The kick is panned 100% to the left? You should probably change that, it can get annoying to headphone users. If you can, you might want to add some reverb to the strings. I know Strofe uses soundfonts but right now the song could be that much better if the chords could flow into each other more naturally.
Finally, some of the guitar(?) chords are very dissonant, which might get annoying. You might want to increase the attack or even change some of the chords themselves.
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hmmm, maybe I should do that and try to improve it.
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Also the guitars are Acoustic Guitar (nylon) and Electric Bass (finger).
Great music, as @Zacchary21 Said, the title doesn’t fit the music.
This feels like something in some sort of town theme
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Thanks, so what should I name it to fit the music more?
Should I replace Acoustic Guitar (nylon)?
I kind of like this, sounds so chill and feels like you are playing a nice game just walking around, exploring.
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hmmm I should REALLY change the name
I really like how calming it sounds good job
Alright, making a name change to “Super chill music in town”
Here’s the new version, how do you guys think about it?
Wow. Just WOW! Is there any chance I could pay you robux for these audios? They sound awesome!
I could but… it costs Robux to add, and I’m not gonna use about 350 Robux to add it on Roblox.
Oh right lol.
Could I possibly just send you robux thru a group so you can give me the mp3 for me to upload?
No thanks. I don’t really give audio that I made to others. Sorry.
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It’s fine and understandable. I kinda treat my work like a “baby” of some sort. Gotta take care of it and make sure it doesn’t get into the wrong hands, yknow?