Hi guys,I just built a cool building but I want you guys tell me Is it cool or not. I would be very greatful if you guys say what you fell about it.
I put it in my portfolio [PORTFOLIO]-conbovodich's portfolio
Here are the building
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/749087501171294289/749100207085453363/RobloxScreenShot20200829_095616753.png
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Hey! It looks cool and simple, but if you’d like to add more detail to it and make it even better, you should try adding some more details to the windows and the building itself. Something similar to this (taken from another DevForum page) is an epic example.
(DevForum image uploading broken at the moment)
https://devforum.roblox.com/uploads/default/original/4X/2/4/e/24ef7a4d9e5c26eec972e0362e7a80227a756866.png
I think that is a perfect example of what you can do/add to your creation! Overall, looks pretty cool, maybe a bit to much of wire extending from the buildings, but hey, we’re all still learning new things! Also, try work on the baseplate aswell, maybe add a road, street lights etc. Looking good so far, let’s see what you can make next! I’m excited!
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Pretty simple, you could add more to it (flower pots and such!)
I think it’s a bit too early for you to be doing commissions.
Could you please upload your image to the thread directly you can do this by hovering to the upper left and click “choose file”. Instead of letting users have to open a link in order to view what you’ve created or made.
Consider it’s a simple design you could try creating variety of buildings instead of it being repetitive the buildings have a simplistic design which i’m assuming that’s what your going for. However if I’m not mistaken this is something that’s featured in sorting city’s, perhaps add more details on the side of the buildings just to give it more details.
These buildings normally have objects on the roof part and side areas, placing lights in the corner could improve that a bit more I just feel like the buildings you’ve made are a bit basic in a kind of way.
Try adding a different kind of building just to make the theme more interesting have a small building on the front or side, consider doing something like that at the start it’s not bad just needs more objects in my opinion.