I have created this laptop a while ago, but I really want some feedback. My first try, the keys were everywhere and it was not good what so ever. This one in my opinion is way better.
1st attempt: 
2nd attempt 
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Hello there!
The 2nd attempt laptop looks nice!
However, there are errors on the laptop.
1. Touchpad
- The touchpad looks weird because it only has two buttons and not the pad.
2. Laptop top-right corner
- I see some overlapping parts over it. You need to change the colour and transform it into a union for sure. This will reduce lags in the model.
That’s a nice laptop btw! 
I’m impresssd on your second attempt and here are a few changes I would make to improve your model. First of all you should either choose between black or white, I don’t like it how you have white on the panel and frames then black covering the rest of the laptop. Also, gaming laptops usually have a rainbow colour or an abnormally different colour rather than standard white and black keyframes. If you want to make the laptop as real as possible, add a sort of metallic body colour for the laptop, you should also have letters on the keyboard (yes, it takes up a lot of time but it’s worth it in the end). Overall, your progress is exceeding more than starter model maker standards. Keep up the great work 