Hey! I’m K0rrupt! I was just wondering what I could do to improve my building skills in Roblox Studio!
Here is a Time Portal build I made for a Build Battle and I was wondering what you guys would think I should improve for a next Build Battle
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it looks really very good, maybe next time you could build something in the low poly style I’m very excited : o
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Thanks! And what is “low-poly style”?
Sorry I don’t know much about building, which is why I want to get better at it.
I think if you made the portal into a transparent Neon and added a few light sources matching the portal’s gradient that increase in radius, you could end up with a very interesting build. =)
Cool idea anyhow.
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I certainly see potential. It may just be me, but the conveyor belt looking thing isn’t in the middle of the grass brick. When you took this photo, you still had the grass brick selected. Try to avoid this next time to increase immersion. As for the portal itself, I believe it’s an interesting concept, though it could have been executed better. The portal needs to be textured neon, given more particles, and given a point light. To increase immersion, get rid of the running character’s name. To do this, you can either set the name of the character to a blank space or edit the Humanoid’s properties. Other than that, I certainly see potential.
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I love it! I’d maybe make this part look like it could be actually used for a support structure.
It looks like design.
That’s just my opinion. Love it, maybe even make the teleporter neon!
Great job!
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I would say from my experience that the low poly style is that you build but add no texture.
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It look really good! I would recommend having less of these:
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Maybe build it more low poly and try to make less dents. Other than that, it’s really good!
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It’s pretty good, I would make the back of the portal stone with extra detail, and make everything else neon and add some lights to make it glow. Over all, my favourite pet is the cool number/letters in what looks like some really cool sacred writing. Really cool, keep it up.
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