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I made a thumbnail for someone and I want feedback on how I can improve. I used Cinema 4D and Photoshop. I found the 3d model for the jets online and rendered them, and retextured the clothing.
The Image
Feedback is wanted!
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They look so cool! This is a professional icon if I ever saw one!
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This looks great! I just think you need to make the gun a lot smaller.
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Lol ok I think you are right! 
Thanks for the feedback!
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Hello! 
I really like your Navy thumbnail, but I suggest that you make it so the toes don’t clip through the ground and like what Crazedbrick1 said, you might want to shrink the guns a little as they look a bit huge for the character and clips through the shoulder.
I also believe that this jet looks a little off. It’s landing gears are still open?
Doesn’t it look like it’s partially in the building or it’s just way too close and disoriented looking? Anyways, you did an amazing job and I wish you luck on future commissions!
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This is really good, no kidding. Love the detail and how smooth it is.
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I love the scene as well as the core details you have put on your ship! Something cool would be some more details like dirt, scratches and overall more noise to show these soldiers running!
Awesome work and keep at it!
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Looks awesome!
However the explosion in the top right seems a bit off putting, due to its position. Since we don’t see what’s being blown up, we can’t tell if it’s real or not.
Nice work!
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It’s great but the guns are oversized and the uniforms aren’t that good. The poses don’t really portray any movement it just looks as if they were walking toys in my opinion.
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Pretty cool GFX, I can tell that a player is going to see a fighter/roleplay game when they see this.
I would possibly change the guns on the different soldiers a bit.
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I agree with @coneylove133, that jet does seem a little off.
I think everything else is fine, good job @Jackman13799!!
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Huge leap here, but if you have the experience, maybe attempt cloth simulation/ sculpting and turn those pixel clothes into realistic clothing?
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I might be able to I just never tried. 
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This is really well done, although the characters look a bit… perfect, if that makes sense. They all look basically the same. Maybe change up the skin tones up a bit and change some of the faces to add a bit of variety.
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